Monday, 14 September 2020

Isn't it time to get a new phone but what brand should you get, apple or samsung?

Isn't it time to get a new phone? But what brand should you get, apple or samsung?  Within this text I will explain three reasons as to why you should get an apple phone instead of a samsung one. My reasons are size, options and price. ps I will be using the latest phones as an example.  

Firstly, the size is very different between apple and samsung with apple iphone 11 at 75.7 mm wide and 150.9 mm tall on the s20 ultra it’s so much taller 161.9 mm tall and 73.7 mm wide to be exact so that means that a samsung will feel like a tall thin smooth whiteboard eraser. Speaking about the size the ram is very different. RAM which means Random access memory which is basically the amount of data in the device. anyway. Apple has 64 GB and Samsung having only!! 16 GB of ram thats miniscule compared to apples 64 GB.

Secondly, each brand has so many generations of their phone and just so many options like samsung has 56 and apple has just 20 but is having more generations better? because samsung is releasing so many phones so quickly when you buy the latest phone in 1 year that phone is going to be very old to most people so then you buy another one and then you do the same thing over and over and over again. and those phones only have only slight changes but Apple on the other hand only releases once per year and really thinks about their additions. I think this is very intellectual.

Lastly the pricing is very different between apple and samsung apple is the cheapest still with a whopping 1050 new zealand dollars and samsung has a massive price of 2100 new zealand dollars.

Throughout this text i have explained without a doubt these 3 reasons as to why you should 100% get an apple iphone. size, options and price.


Success Criteria:

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I have used my first technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my second technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my third technique to enhance my writing

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Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing.

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Active Reflection: 

My Reflection



What have I done well?



I have emotive language 





Next step:



I need to use  rhetorical questions





1 comment:

  1. Zǎoshang hǎo (good morning) Baxter, I really enjoyed your controversial topic of Samsung and Apple smartphones. It brings up a lot of debate in my opinion. You have given some good reasons to backup your argument, Zuò dé hǎo (well done). Next time it would be even better if you doubled checked your next step in your active reflection as you did have examples of using rhetorical questions. Zàijiàn (goodbye), Miss Hickling.

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